edit guide/your-first-scene.md

docs/guide/your-first-scene.md

@@ -1,21 +1,21 @@
 # Your first scene
 
-This guide will help you to create your first Tres scene. 🍩
+This guide will help you create your first Tres scene. 🍩
 
 ## Setting up the experience Canvas
 
-Before we can create an Scene, we need somewhere to display it. Using plain [ThreeJS](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html#manual/en/introduction/Creating-a-scene) we would need to create a `canvas` html element to mount the `WebglRenderer` and initialize the `scene`
+Before we can create a Scene, we need somewhere to display it. Using plain [ThreeJS](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html#manual/en/introduction/Creating-a-scene) we would need to create a `canvas` html element to mount the `WebglRenderer` and initialize the `scene`.
 
 With **TresJS** you only need to add the default component `<TresCanvas />` to the template of your Vue component.
 
 ```vue
 <template>
-  <TresCanvas> // Your scene is going to live here </TresCanvas>
+  <TresCanvas> // Your scene lives here </TresCanvas>
 </template>
 ```
 
 ::: warning
-It's important that all components related to the scene live between the `<TresCanvas />` component. Otherwise, they will be not rendered.
+It's important that all components related to the scene live inside the `<TresCanvas />` component. Otherwise, they will be not rendered.
 :::
 
 The `TresCanvas` component is going to do some setup work behind the scene:
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ We need 3 core elements to create a 3D experience:
 
 - A [**Camera**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=camera#api/en/cameras/Camera)
 - An [**Object**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=object#api/en/core/Object3D)
-- An [**Scene**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=scene#api/en/scenes/Scene) to hold the camera and the object(s) together.
+- A [**Scene**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=scene#api/en/scenes/Scene) to hold the camera and the object(s) together.
 
 With **TresJS** you can create a Scene using the `<TresScene />` component.
 
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ Then you can add a [**PerspectiveCamera**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q
 
 ## Adding a Sphere
 
-That scene looks a litle empty, let's add a basic object. If we where using plain **ThreeJS** we would need to create a [**Mesh**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=mesh#api/en/objects/Mesh) object and attach to it a [**Material**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=material#api/en/materials/Material) and a [**Geometry**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=geometry#api/en/core/BufferGeometry) like this:
+That scene looks a litle empty--let's add a basic object. If we were using plain **ThreeJS** we would need to create a [**Mesh**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=mesh#api/en/objects/Mesh) object and attach a [**Material**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=material#api/en/materials/Material) and a [**Geometry**](https://threejs.org/docs/index.html?q=geometry#api/en/core/BufferGeometry) to it like this:
 
 ```ts
 const geometry = new THREE.TorusGeometry(1, 0.5, 16, 32)
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ scene.add(donut)
 
 A Mesh is a basic scene object in three.js, and it's used to hold the geometry and the material needed to represent a shape in 3D space.
 
-Now let's see how we can easily achieve the same with **TresJS**. To do that we are going to use `<TresMesh />` component, and between the default slots, we are going to pass a `<TresTorusGeometry />` and a `<TresMeshBasicMaterial />`.
+Now let's see how we can easily achieve the same with **TresJS**. To do that we are going to use the `<TresMesh />` component, and in the default slots, we are going to pass a `<TresTorusGeometry />` and a `<TresMeshBasicMaterial />`.
 
 ```vue
 <template>
@@ -86,9 +86,9 @@ Now let's see how we can easily achieve the same with **TresJS**. To do that we
 ```
 
 ::: info
-Notice that we don't need to import anything, thats because **TresJS** automatically generate a **Vue Component based of the Three Object you want to use in CamelCase with a Tres prefix**. For example, if you want to use a `AmbientLight` you would use `<TresAmbientLight />` component.
+Notice that we don't need to import anything. **TresJS** automatically generates a **Vue Component whose name is created by combining the prefix 'Tres' with the Three Object you want to use (in CamelCase)**. For example, if you want to use an `AmbientLight` you would use the `<TresAmbientLight />` component.
 :::
 
 <FirstScene />
 
-From here onwards you can start adding more objects to your scene and start playing with the properties of the components to see how they affect the scene.
+From here onwards you can start adding more objects to your scene and play with the properties of the components to see how they affect the scene.